tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6765179958502686865.post4984725663964370438..comments2023-03-28T08:22:10.728-05:00Comments on Creative Writing Guild: CardioCWGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13545798337199259484noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6765179958502686865.post-26107441144962431492008-02-27T22:36:00.000-06:002008-02-27T22:36:00.000-06:00This piece starts of so cliche I almost dismissed ...This piece starts of so cliche I almost dismissed it without reading on. Any time you talk about slitting throats in such a blatant way it's going to be a turn off. But then you move on to the "...'N...'em..." portion of the poem which I love in the dark light of the first few lines. Read as a whole, this poem has a great sense of sad humor with good vigor and latent energy, and this only works in contrast to the first few lines.CWGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13545798337199259484noreply@blogger.com